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Example Navy Achievement
Medal (NAM) Writeups
For outstanding performance as (TITLE), (COMMAND-spell out) from (Month year) to
(Month year) (while embarked in ( ) deployed to ( ) ) . You performed your demanding
duties in an exemplary and highly professional manner. (clause, complimentary modifier,
attribute), you were directly responsible for (IDENTIFY ACCOMPLISHMENT) which led to
improvements in (squadron/combat, etc.) efficiency/readiness/safety during ( ) . (clause,
complimentary modifier, attribute) , you (IDENTIFY SPECIFIC EVOLUTION/EVENT) ,
resulting in (IDENTIFY SPECIFIC RESULT) in support of ( 1 . (clause, complimentary
modifier, attribute), you inspired all who observed you and contributed significantly to the
successful accomplishment of (COMMAND SHORT T1TLE)'s mission. Your initiative,
perseverance and total devotion to duty reflected great credit upon yourself and were in
keeping with the highest traditions of the United States Naval Service.

For outstanding performance of duties as Work Center 41L  Leading Petty Officer and
Collateral Duty Inspector, Power Plants Division, Aircraft Intermediate Maintenance
Detachment Misawa, Japan from September 2005 to September 2008. Petty Officer
Johnson consistently performed his demanding duties in an exemplary and highly
professional manner. Displaying exceptional leadership and technical expertise, he was
directly responsible for the completion of over 890 maintenance actions resulting with the
expeditious repair and subsequent return to service of 79 T56-A-14 Aircraft Engines and
21 54H60-77 propellers for PATRON forces operating throughout the Western Pacific
Theater in support of the Global War on Terrorism Campaign.  In addition, his strict
adherence to NAMP policies and procedures resulted in the overall grade of satisfactory
on the 2008 Aviation Maintenance Management Team inspection.  Petty Officer Johnson's
diligent efforts, resourcefulness and loyal devotion to duty reflected credit upon himself
and were in keeping with the highest traditions of the United States Naval Service.

For professional achievement in the superior performance of his duties while serving
onboard USS (his ship) from ### to ###. Demonstrating superior understanding of
submarine tactics and employment, he directly contributed to (his ship)'s success during
missions vital to the global war on terrorism, submarine command course operations, and
and expeditionary strike group exercise.  (He) excelled in his role as Main Propulsion
Assistant ensuring his division was trained and fully ready for a demanding shipyard
maintenance period. He effectively managed complex repairs to the main engines,
reduction gears, and propulsion shaft replacement, and supervised the execution of over
120 formal and controlled work packages. As duty officer, he established effective working
relationships with shipyard counterparts, enabling an effective, team centric work
environment. He expertly managed thousands of hours of work and testing, ensuring first
time quality and directly contributing to (his ship)'s ability to complete a selected restricted
availability thirty percent faster, and with sixty percent fewer problems than previously
accomplished. Hand-picked to stand  Engineering Officer of the Watch for propulsion
plant testing, he led his watch team to success, ensuring the safe and efficient execution
of a demanding test program. (His) exceptional professionalism and selfless devotion to
duty reflected great credit upon himself and were in keeping with the highest traditions of
the U.S Naval service.